by Adam Patterson

Rating: 1.5/5

A man wakes up on a floor, in pain and confused. We slowly, very slowly witness him detailing what he feels as he tries to move and understand what happened. Then he finally starts getting flashbacks about what had taken place.

I didn’t like the writing, there were a lot of at firsts and mispellings, it was slow paced (never thought I would say this about a short story) and the ending was predictable. There are better short stories out there.

Oh and the cover was completely ridiculous and speaks well to the quality of this story.

Read on December 30, 2014
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